Vanilla Peeks Reviews

Okay I don't think I'm inclined to make multiple threads for different stories, so I figured I'll just make one thread and stuff them all in there.

Live For Me is actually really old. I wrote it back in 2001. I haven't changed anything in it - including the pretty terrible grammar and well, most of the entire way its written leaves something to be desired.

But feedback on everything that pops up in this thread, is very appreciated and will be considered

There is a new addition to the thread now, A poem, Dear Daddy.

It was written in 2002 originally, updated with another stanza in 2007. I was studying at the time in English, Sylvia Plath, thus those that know of her stuff will probably recognise some influence.

It was written as I suppose, something of a therapy? Getting things down and after reading Sylvia Plath's own version of her poem about/to her father, it gave me inspiration.

As always, feedback is appreciated.

First of all, you're talking about Sylvia Plath's "Daddy," right? Because that poem is AMAZING. The end always gives me chills.

Second of all. Its really great. I love the poem you wrote. c:

Thank you Kae =) And yes, her poetry is awesome though I haven't read it for a while so it probably is Daddy I just forgot the name of it.

New poem up, Heart's Anxiety. I don't remember when I wrote this, I think it was back in 2007. No sort of background for it that I can remember anyway, there may have been but yeah, I don't remember it.