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 Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----}

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Bloody_Maiden
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PostSubject: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----}   Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} EmptyThu Jul 23, 2009 12:32 pm

Review section-Comments, advice, critiques are welcomed. ^^


Please be honest. Oh, and put the title as well. ^^
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Wastedxwithxtime
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PostSubject: Re: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----}   Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} EmptyFri Jul 24, 2009 5:08 pm

Like a brick is really good. I like it! it speaks strongly! its great!

Saying many things and spreading many words, I fail to see how the title goes along with the poem. It is a good poem, I'm just not so sure the title goes so well with it.

Grieving in whispers is a good poem although its a bit sad, It speaks of ones you love and have lost. That very poem must mean the most to you. It's great! good job!

A tale to a child is very good! It speaks clearly and it flows very nicely.

and Always there beside you. Wow.. I think this is my favorite one! its great! I absolutely love it!
I love them all! Very Happy
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Mike
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PostSubject: Re: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----}   Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} EmptySat Jul 25, 2009 1:43 pm

I've only had a chance to read your most recent one, but I really like it.

I especially liked this line:

"I still feel this dispassionate hate for the misleading"

Such a powerful line, it sounds almost pitying towards the friends in the poem.
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PostSubject: Re: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----}   Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} EmptySat Jul 25, 2009 1:45 pm

Thank you both. <3 I am happy to hear people like my writings. ^^ More to come in the future.
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PostSubject: Re: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----}   Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} EmptyWed Nov 11, 2009 4:03 pm

Ode to DHRPG
Well spoken, very heartfelt and intensely sentimental in the best way.
~Shiroi-Ka
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PostSubject: Re: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----}   Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} EmptyTue May 25, 2010 10:43 am

Why should I change?
Very nice, it speaks volumes about the world today and how people hide themselves from everyone around them, including themselves. I agree wholeheartedly, the world will take a giant step forwards when we learn to be who we really are.
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PostSubject: Re: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----}   Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} EmptyThu Aug 12, 2010 4:40 pm

Open, Hear the Voice.

Wonderful. I love how your poetry flows, especially this one.

It's almost as if the poem is being spoken by some sort of deity, speaking to some forlorn person.

Beautiful work Mai!
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I like Open, Hear The Voice for it's easy flow and the message behind it. Trusting others doesn't come easily to many people, increasingly we isolate and shut out possible friends to protect ourselves. This poem sounds to me like a warning against that, a request to trust first and let good things happen. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----}   Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} EmptyTue Sep 14, 2010 11:12 am

Thank you two Razz
I only speak with my heart, emotions.
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