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Bloody_Maiden Tackle Angel
Posts : 775 Join date : 2009-07-23 Age : 34 Location : A future undecided...
| Subject: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:32 pm | |
| Review section-Comments, advice, critiques are welcomed. ^^
Please be honest. Oh, and put the title as well. ^^ | |
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Wastedxwithxtime Underachiever
Posts : 310 Join date : 2009-07-23 Age : 31 Location : Somewhere in the depths of hell
| Subject: Re: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} Fri Jul 24, 2009 5:08 pm | |
| Like a brick is really good. I like it! it speaks strongly! its great! Saying many things and spreading many words, I fail to see how the title goes along with the poem. It is a good poem, I'm just not so sure the title goes so well with it. Grieving in whispers is a good poem although its a bit sad, It speaks of ones you love and have lost. That very poem must mean the most to you. It's great! good job! A tale to a child is very good! It speaks clearly and it flows very nicely. and Always there beside you. Wow.. I think this is my favorite one! its great! I absolutely love it! I love them all! | |
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Mike The Writing Writer
Posts : 1385 Join date : 2009-07-22 Age : 39 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} Sat Jul 25, 2009 1:43 pm | |
| I've only had a chance to read your most recent one, but I really like it.
I especially liked this line:
"I still feel this dispassionate hate for the misleading"
Such a powerful line, it sounds almost pitying towards the friends in the poem. | |
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Bloody_Maiden Tackle Angel
Posts : 775 Join date : 2009-07-23 Age : 34 Location : A future undecided...
| Subject: Re: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} Sat Jul 25, 2009 1:45 pm | |
| Thank you both. <3 I am happy to hear people like my writings. ^^ More to come in the future. | |
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Shiroi-Ka Delinquent
Posts : 722 Join date : 2009-08-13 Age : 34 Location : 4 inches left of the center of the multiverse.
| Subject: Re: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} Wed Nov 11, 2009 4:03 pm | |
| Ode to DHRPG Well spoken, very heartfelt and intensely sentimental in the best way. ~Shiroi-Ka | |
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Shiroi-Ka Delinquent
Posts : 722 Join date : 2009-08-13 Age : 34 Location : 4 inches left of the center of the multiverse.
| Subject: Re: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} Tue May 25, 2010 10:43 am | |
| Why should I change? Very nice, it speaks volumes about the world today and how people hide themselves from everyone around them, including themselves. I agree wholeheartedly, the world will take a giant step forwards when we learn to be who we really are. | |
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Mike The Writing Writer
Posts : 1385 Join date : 2009-07-22 Age : 39 Location : Liverpool
| Subject: Re: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} Thu Aug 12, 2010 4:40 pm | |
| Open, Hear the Voice.
Wonderful. I love how your poetry flows, especially this one.
It's almost as if the poem is being spoken by some sort of deity, speaking to some forlorn person.
Beautiful work Mai! | |
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Shiroi-Ka Delinquent
Posts : 722 Join date : 2009-08-13 Age : 34 Location : 4 inches left of the center of the multiverse.
| Subject: Re: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} Fri Aug 13, 2010 1:46 am | |
| I like Open, Hear The Voice for it's easy flow and the message behind it. Trusting others doesn't come easily to many people, increasingly we isolate and shut out possible friends to protect ourselves. This poem sounds to me like a warning against that, a request to trust first and let good things happen. | |
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Bloody_Maiden Tackle Angel
Posts : 775 Join date : 2009-07-23 Age : 34 Location : A future undecided...
| Subject: Re: Maiden's Poetry Center {----Review----} Tue Sep 14, 2010 11:12 am | |
| Thank you two I only speak with my heart, emotions. | |
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