Xirius' Poetry-Review

Subject: Xirius' Poetry-Review Thu Jul 23, 2009 7:15 pm

Please be as honest and as constructive as possible Smile

Subject: Re: Xirius' Poetry-Review Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:23 pm

I really like your untitled poem. Short, but wonderful flow and the rhyming was just brilliant!

Subject: Re: Xirius' Poetry-Review Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:52 pm

I agree with Mai. I like your untitled poem. It is really good! the flow of it is just simply amazing!

and Defeat sounds like it could be turned into more of a story, rather then a poem.. BUT! It still sounds Amazing! and its really good!

keep it up! your doing Great! ^.^

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