Review for Seven: Immortals' Stories.

Hello darlings So this is the place you put your comments for my story "Seven: Immortals' Stories" I hope you enjoy it. Comments, compliments, criticism are welcomed.

Note: Each story is called a book: Book 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, and 7.

I have to say, I'm absolutely loving your work Mai! I've read each book again, and I'm completely enthralled. Each character's death is described in such close and emotional detail, I find myself kind of "in the scene" as though I'm watching the action unfold with my own eyes.

My one reservation, and it's only a really minor one, is grammar. There are one or two little errors in there, but other than the odd word, your writing, and your writing style, has me hooked. I can't wait for the next two parts!

Thanks for reminding me lol. Yeah these are rough drafts. When I have the time I plan to freshen them up. I am glad you like it. I feel that we just need to get into a character's head especially the main to understand their reasoning.

Brilliant hun! Book 6 is really good! I'm loving how you manage to get me in the minds of the characters.